Its okay
I like the Atreyu part lol. Its amusing for a little while (actually keeping him alive) and to be fair, I dont find it offensive (according to some im 'emo' or whatevs) I mean, you CAN keep him alive IF YOU WANTED its up to you to control what happens. In other words if he gets depressed and kills himself its your fault :)
Overall, its okay. For a while.